Say yes,
For m honest in my words,
I’ll walk with you, in all your odds.
You are and you were the one,
Forgive me if I miss out on some.
Say yes,
For those lovely walks we had,
The talks, totally so mad.
The fights that lasted for days,
For without you, there weren’t many ways.
Say yes,
I promise you I can imitate him,
That guy in the serial, you like.
I will be him, whenever you feel
Your smile for me, is what`s the deal.
Say yes,
For I m nothing without you,
Without you,my life so longs for it’s clue.
With you around, I can get all
Trust me baby, I’ll never let you fall.
Say yes,
For those eyes seek none but you,
Explained the heart , but it doesn`t listen to me too.
Look into those eyes,
Deny if there you find any lies.
Say yes,
As I kneel before you,
Trying to perfect this moment.
Laugh if I appear fool,
But say yes, for I truly love you…….
awesommmeee..
ReplyDeleteit touched my heart..deeply!!
thanks a lot:D
ReplyDeletenyc work :)
ReplyDeletethank you:)
ReplyDeletebeautifully written! you have earned a fan!!! :)
ReplyDeletethank you Jyotthsnaa.Sweet of you to say that:)
ReplyDeletebest and awesome keep writing!!!
ReplyDeletethanks Romit :)
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ReplyDeletevery cutely written....great :)
ReplyDeletethanks Noopor :)
ReplyDeletelovely.. <3
ReplyDeletethanks Ritika!:)
ReplyDeleteSay Yes just tinkled every feeling in my heart , awesome . Well u truly are lovable n romantic at heart and it shows in all ur poems n writings .
ReplyDeleteMy fav is the last 2 stanzas specially where u have written -' laugh if i appear a fool ' , its sooooo sweeeeeeeeeeet .
U always amaze me with such wonderful lines which are soo real to life.
thank you so much. :)
ReplyDeleteIt took me 2 a different world shivam.... truly appreciate ur writings... picture perfect romantic it is.. <3ly..! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is lovable. Though, you have improved amazingly, now.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tripti. :)
DeleteBeautifully Written .....
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