Thursday, 19 April 2012

Hope I'm missed



When you pronounce that word wrong.
Just the way you always did.
With many to correct but none to tease.
I hope I’m missed.

When your hair form funny patterns,
Ruled by wind, pleading for help.
With many to look but none to admire.
I hope I’m missed.

When those late afternoons find you lonely.
Throwing the pebbles, sunk in thoughts.
With many to advice but none to embrace.
I hope I’m missed.

When you languidly pass across that coffee shop,
holding that bag falling on you.
Willing to stop but forced to move.
I hope I’m missed.

When the first rain touches you,
soaking you wet, causing the shiver.
You yearn for warmth.
I hope I’m missed.

When you try the dress for the first time.
Asking the mirror, denied the reply.
Looking for answers.
I hope I’m missed.

When your night longs for rest.
Lost in movements, wrapped in sheet.
Holding the pillow feigning to sleep.
I hope I’m missed.

When I know, I’m nothing but a faint memory
Unsure of worth, nearing its end.
I hope. I still hope,
I’m missed.
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36 comments:

  1. nitya nair19 April 2012 at 12:21

    "With many to advice but none to embrace
    I hope I’m missed... "
    amazing.....!!

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  2. Abhishek19 April 2012 at 19:27

    Great Work!

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  3. Sneh19 April 2012 at 22:00

    This one's gr8 !

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  4. Devanathan Ram19 April 2012 at 22:20

    Good Job Bro!!!

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  5. Unknown20 April 2012 at 01:16

    Thank you everyone!:)

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  6. Simran20 April 2012 at 05:40

    ausum...y dnt u write a novel & get it published :P :)

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  7. Unknown20 April 2012 at 06:00

    thinking of it!:)

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  8. $neh@l...20 April 2012 at 06:19

    anada gr8 composition! :D :)

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  9. Unknown20 April 2012 at 06:22

    thanks Snehal!:)

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  10. Happiness. Love. Life.20 April 2012 at 06:44

    had this been writtn by my boyfriend for me (nt so lucky to hv 1) i wld hv said.... Yes u r missed.. In evry breath i take, fr evry secnd of my lyf, fr evry moment i live....

    Beautifully writtn.. Its a pleasure to read u Mr. Chaitanya.. Keep it up..! :)

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  11. Anwesha Mohanty20 April 2012 at 06:55

    nice one ! :)

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  12. Unknown20 April 2012 at 07:06

    thank you!:)

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  13. aina20 April 2012 at 08:36

    1ns again awesum wrk shivam :) (she z really lucky ) :))

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  14. Dreamer.......20 April 2012 at 08:56

    great work... keep writing :)

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  15. DIPAK BHARDWAJ20 April 2012 at 09:05

    my heart is going leaps and bounds MR. BLOGGER.. it has aroused each one's pining for one's love .. whether it is my dear lads or lolitazz.. AM I RIGHT ?? WELL I THINK SO..
    my heart has begin to dive deeper into it.. i m really spellbound on MR.SHIVAM charismatic literary flair.. it seems as if he had poured out each one's heart out my dear lads and lolitzz..!!

    my heart keeps on lingering these exotic lines..

    "When I know, I’m nothing but a faint memory
    Unsure of worth, nearing its end.
    I hope. I still hope,
    I’m missed."

    one personal question.. mr bro..who is that lucky lady..?? well u can discuss in private sirji !!

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  16. Nishu21 April 2012 at 03:14

    Gr8ly written... so touchy...
    hope sum1 sumwhre is missd truely :)
    keep writin :)

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  17. Unknown21 April 2012 at 11:04

    Thank you so much!:)

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  18. Unknown22 April 2012 at 08:23

    bhai !! u have gone way ahead with your writing ... :) this one can arouse feelings in a stone i tell you !! loved it ... to the core !! :) \m/
    P.S. m on your fan list now ...somewhere on the top :)

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  19. Anonymous26 April 2012 at 13:29

    This is great! :)

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  20. Anonymous26 April 2012 at 17:43

    beautiful! well captured!

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  21. Maddy3 May 2012 at 11:48

    "When your night longs for rest.
    Lost in movements, wrapped in sheet.
    Holding the pillow feigning to sleep.
    I hope I’m missed..."
    <3 merely the "heart out" <3

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  22. Miana6 May 2012 at 06:28

    It was beautiful Shivam..Really mesmerizing and stirring. :)
    Love is a powerful emotion..and when that leaves..It has so many unsaid things..
    Exceptional work..One of my fave!! :D

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  23. Anonymous7 May 2012 at 07:05

    Awsmmmm:)

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  24. Madhuri Thorawade5 June 2012 at 00:27

    WOW , u really nailed this one soo well . We all hope to be missed by some one - that special one , at some moments in our lifetime . The 3th 4th 5th n last stanzas are my favourite . The last stanza just amazed me while reading and it was perfect as i could relate to it - simply beautiful Shivam .I am glad u wrote this one .

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  25. Unknown5 June 2012 at 10:48

    Thank you so much!:)

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  26. anjali srivastava16 July 2012 at 03:58

    this one i seriously liked theee most among all of your's.!!
    awesome it is..

    keep up the good work.. :)best wishes..

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  27. Ashwini Patil18 August 2012 at 11:28

    So touchy...

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  28. Unknown19 August 2012 at 12:14

    Thank You. :)

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  29. sme1 unknown8 September 2012 at 02:56

    I JUST LOVED THE WAY U PLAYED WITH WORDS IN THIS SECTION ND CAN'T STOP MYSELF WRITNG THIS EULOGY TO U.U R RELY FAB BUDDY KEEP WRITNG AS I M W8NG 4 ANOTHER SMASHING PIECE OF POETRY FRM UR SYD....

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  30. Unknown16 September 2012 at 06:07

    wow!!! very nice!!!!

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  31. sneha19 September 2012 at 03:41

    OMG!! First blog am seeing lotta comments :) grt fan following :)ahem!! ;) Move on!! rock the world with letters :)

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  32. Unknown13 October 2012 at 07:23

    very nice..well done

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  33. Unknown26 October 2012 at 23:08

    beautifully expressed !!! loved the write

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  34. Ritika Das1 December 2013 at 06:31

    this is spectacular.. simply awesome! :)

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  35. epistories.blogspot.co.in11 July 2014 at 00:58

    Wow!!! Exceptionally awesome.... :)

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  36. Unknown13 August 2015 at 04:11

    Very well written :)

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