Tuesday, 10 April 2012
One last time
If I could write one last time,
I’d remind you of the time we met.
The days when things were easier
And everything seemed like a dream.
If I could write one last time,
I’d write the things I fell for.
The subtle touch of comfort
And the deep painful eyes.
If I could write one last time,
I’d describe the walk.
When your hair struggled with the wind
And the charm sashayed off with ease.
If I could write one last time,
I’d confess the things I never could.
The water trickling on your eyes,
The tears I always wanted to wipe.
If I could write one last time,
I’d talk of the songs dedications.
When night appeared short
To contain our chats.
If I could write one last time,
I’d pray to get you back,
To read me one last time.
Or I'd never write again.
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love the simplicity.. nice :)
ReplyDeletethanks!:)
ReplyDeletevry nyc... Truly lovd it.. If cld write only 1 lst tym... Vry beautifully written... :)
ReplyDeletethanks Aarohi!:)
ReplyDeletereally awesome and mindblowing... hats off to ur poetic charisma and inclination Shivam.!!!. u rock dude :)
ReplyDeleteToo kind of you to say that Dipak!:) Thank you!:D
ReplyDeleteHonestly i couldnt njoy it by "reading".
ReplyDeleteWas much of ur feeling,May be ur gal will njoy it :p
Touching:)
ReplyDeleteoverflowing of creative ecstacy. i loved it
ReplyDeleteajo joseph
thank you Sir. :)
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ReplyDeletereally its good , nice one...
ReplyDeleteshivam , i could relate every single word with my life !
ReplyDeleteand not only this , all ur posts are exactly related !
i realli realli LOVED this !
Shivam , reading this one bought tears to my eyes that couldn't stop but remembering that someone also gave a smile at the end .This poem will be DEAR TO THE HEART as it touched every emotion n feeling deep down in the heart .
ReplyDeleteYou have written this one soooo beautifully that i really need to bow down to u for all the love u pour in your writtings.
You ROCK DUDE !
<3 :):)
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