Wednesday, 21 March 2012
A little unfair
Fair it was to have dreamt to embrace you,
When all good for you, I prayed.
A little unfair,
To watch you surrender to him.
Fair it was to walk alone,
When to decorate your path was all I wished.
A little unfair,
To watch you run to him.
Fair it was to shun that feeling for you,
When that is all I preached.
A little unfair,
To watch you lost in his thoughts.
Fair it was to knit dreams for you,
When I knew, to live them is distant.
A little unfair,
To strangle those dreams to silence.
Fair it was to know that you are not mine.
A little unfair,
To know you can never be.
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nice poem shivam all the best
ReplyDeletethanks Himani :)
ReplyDeletenice...sometimes its easy to let go dan hold on...n sometimes its fr ur good...its lovely..:) :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome lines :)
ReplyDelete.............Keep it up! ..............
:P
Well, its not dreams.... they are nightmares :(
ReplyDelete"Do u want to know about love,ask a person
who has failed in it" - Shakespere....!
machi chaitanya....well my speculations are going wrong...
Anyways u write the FEEL.... :)
Its brilliantly described Shivam.. liked it a lot. Sometimes it easy to let go rather than staying and waiting for a dream that we know may never come true
ReplyDeletethanks Heena. :)
ReplyDeletenice work....
ReplyDeletekeep going.... :)
thanks Jalaj :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome work! :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing!
thanks Anamika. Ya I'll as long as you keep reading :)
ReplyDeleteIt would be unfair if this blog is not liked.Pretty fair work.
ReplyDeleteAwwww...
ReplyDelete:)
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