Thursday, 19 April 2012

Hope I'm missed



When you pronounce that word wrong.
Just the way you always did.
With many to correct but none to tease.
I hope I’m missed.

When your hair form funny patterns,
Ruled by wind, pleading for help.
With many to look but none to admire.
I hope I’m missed.

When those late afternoons find you lonely.
Throwing the pebbles, sunk in thoughts.
With many to advice but none to embrace.
I hope I’m missed.

When you languidly pass across that coffee shop,
holding that bag falling on you.
Willing to stop but forced to move.
I hope I’m missed.

When the first rain touches you,
soaking you wet, causing the shiver.
You yearn for warmth.
I hope I’m missed.

When you try the dress for the first time.
Asking the mirror, denied the reply.
Looking for answers.
I hope I’m missed.

When your night longs for rest.
Lost in movements, wrapped in sheet.
Holding the pillow feigning to sleep.
I hope I’m missed.

When I know, I’m nothing but a faint memory
Unsure of worth, nearing its end.
I hope. I still hope,
I’m missed.

38 comments:

  1. "With many to advice but none to embrace
    I hope I’m missed... "
    amazing.....!!

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  2. This one's gr8 !

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  3. ausum...y dnt u write a novel & get it published :P :)

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  4. anada gr8 composition! :D :)

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  5. had this been writtn by my boyfriend for me (nt so lucky to hv 1) i wld hv said.... Yes u r missed.. In evry breath i take, fr evry secnd of my lyf, fr evry moment i live....

    Beautifully writtn.. Its a pleasure to read u Mr. Chaitanya.. Keep it up..! :)

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  6. 1ns again awesum wrk shivam :) (she z really lucky ) :))

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  7. my heart is going leaps and bounds MR. BLOGGER.. it has aroused each one's pining for one's love .. whether it is my dear lads or lolitazz.. AM I RIGHT ?? WELL I THINK SO..
    my heart has begin to dive deeper into it.. i m really spellbound on MR.SHIVAM charismatic literary flair.. it seems as if he had poured out each one's heart out my dear lads and lolitzz..!!

    my heart keeps on lingering these exotic lines..

    "When I know, I’m nothing but a faint memory
    Unsure of worth, nearing its end.
    I hope. I still hope,
    I’m missed."

    one personal question.. mr bro..who is that lucky lady..?? well u can discuss in private sirji !!

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  8. Gr8ly written... so touchy...
    hope sum1 sumwhre is missd truely :)
    keep writin :)

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  9. bhai !! u have gone way ahead with your writing ... :) this one can arouse feelings in a stone i tell you !! loved it ... to the core !! :) \m/
    P.S. m on your fan list now ...somewhere on the top :)

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  10. This is great! :)

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  11. beautiful! well captured!

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  12. "When your night longs for rest.
    Lost in movements, wrapped in sheet.
    Holding the pillow feigning to sleep.
    I hope I’m missed..."
    <3 merely the "heart out" <3

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  13. It was beautiful Shivam..Really mesmerizing and stirring. :)
    Love is a powerful emotion..and when that leaves..It has so many unsaid things..
    Exceptional work..One of my fave!! :D

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  14. Madhuri Thorawade5 June 2012 00:27

    WOW , u really nailed this one soo well . We all hope to be missed by some one - that special one , at some moments in our lifetime . The 3th 4th 5th n last stanzas are my favourite . The last stanza just amazed me while reading and it was perfect as i could relate to it - simply beautiful Shivam .I am glad u wrote this one .

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  15. this one i seriously liked theee most among all of your's.!!
    awesome it is..

    keep up the good work.. :)best wishes..

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  16. I JUST LOVED THE WAY U PLAYED WITH WORDS IN THIS SECTION ND CAN'T STOP MYSELF WRITNG THIS EULOGY TO U.U R RELY FAB BUDDY KEEP WRITNG AS I M W8NG 4 ANOTHER SMASHING PIECE OF POETRY FRM UR SYD....

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  17. OMG!! First blog am seeing lotta comments :) grt fan following :)ahem!! ;) Move on!! rock the world with letters :)

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  18. beautifully expressed !!! loved the write

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  19. this is spectacular.. simply awesome! :)

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  20. Wow!!! Exceptionally awesome.... :)

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