Tuesday, 1 November 2011

i walked away.......


With smile that concealed the pain within
She did come to drop me to the station
The expression on her face presented a gamut
Of what she felt and what she wanted to show.
The pain of parting can never be ignored
But she held firm , for it was unfair to leave me sad.
Memories wheeled in the backdrop
As the clock ran faster than ever
We couldn`t blame it though,
It has got into a habit of ruling mankind.
As her dupatta ventured with the wind
I trembled with fear,
 prayed, let no human substitute the wind
Eyes were loyal and they promised to be
Though they ran moist, they radiated love.
I held those hands firm, wiped those tears.
The fragility with which she surrendered
so easily forced an involuntary hug.
Her warm breath,
accentuated the feeling of serene love
 that we had nurtured for ages.
Time spoke again, louder than capacity
For it was roaring on verge of victory.
A kiss was all it allowed.
She handed me my bag , I walked away…….

14 comments:

  1. Leaving is a hard thing, yet we do that..

    Very deep writing. Nice post :)

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  2. Wow. I can so totally relate to this,especially when my best friend left town forever.

    Nice post. :)

    P.S. I answered your question regarding my blog name. You can go see my reply :)

    x

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  3. The fact that you could relate marks my success! Thnks:)

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  4. oh this was intense and very well put. You pick just the right words :) Very well written, Shivam :)

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  5. :) great Poem..

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  6. madhuri Thorawade9 June 2012 at 07:15

    The hardest thing to do is walk away, when u have to do it , from the one you love the most .At times even if u wish for the time to stand still , it just acts as a villian moving fast and was shown by u in the following lines of urs .
    " Time spoke again, louder than capacity
    For it was roaring on verge of victory.
    A kiss was all it allowed. "- u capture human feelings n emotions soo well , innocently n naturally that what most of us want to express is said by u and we love love hearing it from what u write.

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  7. I'm so glad that you could understand. Seriously. :)

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  8. Hi Shivam,
    Someone is plagiarising your work. Thought you should know. Check it out for yourself:

    http://www.humatanweer.blogspot.in/2012/03/i-walked-away.html

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  9. Hi Shivam!

    Do report this blog..she is a big time plagiarist~!


    http://www.humatanweer.blogspot.in/2012/03/i-walked-away.html

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  10. Thank You Priyanka. Reported already. :)

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  11. Thanks for the information Debdatta. :)

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