Wednesday, 21 March 2012

A little unfair

Fair it was to have dreamt to embrace you,
When all good for you, I prayed.

A little unfair,
To watch you surrender to him.

Fair it was to walk alone,
When to decorate your path was all I wished.

A little unfair,
To watch you run to him.

Fair it was to shun that feeling for you,
When that is all I preached.

A little unfair,
To watch you lost in his thoughts.

Fair it was to knit dreams for you,
When I knew, to live them is distant.

A little unfair,
To strangle those dreams to silence.

Fair it was to know that you are not mine.
A little unfair,
To know you can never be.


  1. nice poem shivam all the best

  2. nice...sometimes its easy to let go dan hold on...n sometimes its fr ur good...its lovely..:) :)

  3. Awesome lines :)
    .............Keep it up! ..............


  4. Well, its not dreams.... they are nightmares :(

    "Do u want to know about love,ask a person
    who has failed in it" - Shakespere....!

    machi chaitanya....well my speculations are going wrong...

    Anyways u write the FEEL.... :)

  5. Its brilliantly described Shivam.. liked it a lot. Sometimes it easy to let go rather than staying and waiting for a dream that we know may never come true

  6. nice work....
    keep going.... :)

  7. Awesome work! :)
    Keep writing!

  8. thanks Anamika. Ya I'll as long as you keep reading :)

  9. It would be unfair if this blog is not liked.Pretty fair work.