Wednesday, 21 March 2012

A little unfair





Fair it was to have dreamt to embrace you,
When all good for you, I prayed.

A little unfair,
To watch you surrender to him.


Fair it was to walk alone,
When to decorate your path was all I wished.

A little unfair,
To watch you run to him.


Fair it was to shun that feeling for you,
When that is all I preached.

A little unfair,
To watch you lost in his thoughts.


Fair it was to knit dreams for you,
When I knew, to live them is distant.

A little unfair,
To strangle those dreams to silence.


Fair it was to know that you are not mine.
A little unfair,
To know you can never be.

16 comments:

  1. nice poem shivam all the best

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  2. nice...sometimes its easy to let go dan hold on...n sometimes its fr ur good...its lovely..:) :)

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  3. Awesome lines :)
    .............Keep it up! ..............

    :P

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  4. Well, its not dreams.... they are nightmares :(

    "Do u want to know about love,ask a person
    who has failed in it" - Shakespere....!


    machi chaitanya....well my speculations are going wrong...

    Anyways u write the FEEL.... :)

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  5. Its brilliantly described Shivam.. liked it a lot. Sometimes it easy to let go rather than staying and waiting for a dream that we know may never come true

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  6. nice work....
    keep going.... :)

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  7. Awesome work! :)
    Keep writing!

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  8. thanks Anamika. Ya I'll as long as you keep reading :)

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  9. It would be unfair if this blog is not liked.Pretty fair work.

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